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Bodhi Tree

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i got too serious, so...
« on: November 24, 2012, 01:49:29 PM »
light and frothy, deep and mellow, across the pond and into the shallow
water where the fish zip by, nibble on my legs and fly
skipping on the surface gleams, a new and lovely symmetry

William Blake was a poet, a visionary man with words to show it
the power of the vibrant pen, set loose in motion around the bend
the wooden raft of good Huck Finn--a rite of passage for ordinary men

east and west, north and south, such boundaries crossed
shall never divide, the rising, ripping, roaring tide
of Truth untold...who will speak it? you or me or perhaps all three?

it's a secret, i say, don't you dare do tell
i'll meet you inside the golden bell

(((((((((Bonnnnggggg)))))))))

mattb23

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i got too serious, so...
« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 09:05:57 PM »
Nice

It's a secret that can't be told because it's a Truth beyond words.

See you there! [;)]

Blessings brother [:)]

maheswari

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« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 09:10:23 PM »
it is rather Be there instead of see "you" there[;)]
i like this golden bell[:D]

Bodhi Tree

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i got too serious, so...
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2012, 09:30:29 AM »
quote:
Originally posted by mattb23
It's a secret that can't be told because it's a Truth beyond words.

But alas, that is the impossible job of the poet...to describe the indescribable!

quote:
Originally posted by maheswari
it is rather Be there instead of see "you" there


How about...I'll be-see you here-there. [8D]

Much love to both of you. [:)]

mattb23

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« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2012, 01:05:26 PM »
Beloved friends,

As you wish!

It's always nice to see/experience/be smiling faces...

Namaste [:D]

maheswari

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« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2012, 10:51:39 PM »
quote:
How about...I'll be-see you here-there.

now it is correct ...thank you[:D][8D]
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